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They don't know who I am

They don't know what I've gone through

        And even when it hurts

           And even when there is pain

                 I wonder

                      if

If

       They could

                  Survive the same

Their words may sting

And

  Their laughter may

           Make me

              Cry

                      But there's no way

                         that

I'm going to let

                Life pass me by


                                                And people may talk

                                                And they might judge

                                                But it's who I am

                                                Who I was meant to be

And nothing

      Could ever take that away

                                                From me
It's a song, I'll continue it later.

The indentations may seem a little awkward and random, but they're supposed to be in the places they are ^^'

I'm thinking of writing up the tune later. And possibly singing it. And posting it on yout-never mind. Just kidding.
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love it
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
Wow thank you very much!
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome
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writingbubble Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
Well, tell me should you decide to sing and post it somewhere :)
I'd really like to hear it ^^

by the way, at first I thought it was a poem and I had to think of e.e.commings, because of the way you put the spaces and stuff :D
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
Alright, I will :) Thank you!

Ah, well, I hope that's a good thing :)
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writingbubble Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013
you're welcome :)
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cskadoz Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   General Artist
fun read! :highfive: like the unique structure & emo tone! :hug:
t'anks for saving "grope" hope you like it.
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you! Um, "emo" tone?
You're welcome!
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cskadoz Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   General Artist
emotional tone
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
Oh, alright, good. I was afraid you meant the stereotypical, clique "emo"
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cskadoz Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013   General Artist
:hug:
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magic6jewls Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Writer
Hey! This is good! You definitely should write up a tune and post it on youtube (and link it in the description).

Also, the indents are well placed. Very creative way of showing passage of time, different ideas, pauses, etc...
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much! I'm still thinking about it, maybe ^^

Thank you very much, that's very nice of you to say!
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magic6jewls Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Writer
No problem :)

Send me the link if you decide to do it!
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
Haha doubtful, but sure.
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely song so far.. I like the indents and lines you use with your words :)
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you very much! That makes me happy :)
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punx-chan89 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome :D
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kworking Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Just beautiful! You have some real talent! I'm impressed.
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you so much! That means a lot to me! I say that a lot, but thank you so much.
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Octavias101 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
I featured your work in a journal from my group #Words-of-Life. [link] I also would like to invite you to join our group if you so wish to, as your work is very interesting and comprehensible.
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
Ah thank you so much!!! Of course I'll join!!! Oh, though I think I might have asked to be a Co-Founder? Sorry, there weren't any other options, so it's completely fine if you reject or anything.
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Octavias101 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
yes you are welcome to become a co-founder! ^^
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
Oh good :)
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LupusIntus Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutely LOVE this!
Your use of the indentations to accent certain words and lines is fantastic. :heart:
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much!!!
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AwkwardSnowball Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yesh, I like this a lot :D
And I think the indentations make a nice affect to the whole thing.
Nicely written!
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much :D
Oh good, I'm glad that the indentations work.
Thank you, again!
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AwkwardSnowball Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ah, no prob! :iconbummiesplz:
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Writer
^^
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malupi Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I would like to know how you knew to describe me too. :P
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
I-I wish I knew...?
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malupi Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, I'm just saying I can relate :)
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
Ah, I see I see. Well, in that case I'm both... Glad and... Sad?
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malupi Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeh, I guess lol. :?
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
^^'
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silvergabetha834 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Professional General Artist
Love it. The indents work for it and I like the concept. It flowed well for me. Nice job.
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it!
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student General Artist
I really like this. And I agree with=JJmyster22. I can't wait to see what you do with this next!

P.S Post it on YouTube, it would be good! :iconhurrplz:

P.P.S I also like how you and =JJmyster have matching avatars!
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
Wow thank you!!! Um, YouTube........ Hmmm maybe. I don't know, I'm not that good a singer ^^'

Haha JJ and I are best friends, and he made my icon so that's why they look the same (I forced him to make me one, they gotta be twinsies).
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student General Artist
:D
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JJmyster22 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
Oh, and the indentations and spacing and font work really well. I like the rhyming scheme as well. I can't wait to see where this goes!

PS: You should totally sing it. Sing it to me. SERENADE ME XD
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks JJ!!! That means a lot to me.

PS: Yeah, no.
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JJmyster22 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
Whyyyyyy nooooottttt

YOU KNOW YOU LOVE ME

YOU KNOW YOU CARE

JUST SHOUT WHENEVER

AND I'LL BE THERE

YOU WANT MY LOVE

YOU WANT MY HEART

AND WE WILL NEVER EVER EVER BE APART

ARE WE AN ITEM

GIRL YOU PLAYING

WE'RE JUST FRIENDS

WHAT ARE YOU SAYING- Okay I'm done.
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
STOP IT GO AWAY JJ OKAY OKAY I WILL JUST GOOOOOO
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JJmyster22 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
I really like this! You're a really good writer Owl :)
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks!!! You are too :)
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Muerte23 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
i actually think the spacing makes it flow well? if that makes any sense
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Student Writer
It does, thank you :)
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Sexyman663 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
I like it a lot reminds me of I'm not afraid and Into the nothing songs about going a different and better way
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