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Rain trickles down my window pane
Sparkling glass
Crying diamond tears

Walking down the lane
Frozen in time
Like an old photograph

Bright colors, subdued with nostalgia
Glistening dewdrops
Kiss the flowers' velvet dresses

A fresh breeze
Swirls around me in a whirlwind of
Hope and love

I inhale the dreams that died
Buried under the hard ground
That the new rain has unearthed

I dance with abandon
Childish laughter bubbles up like a spring
As I vivaciously stomp through a stagnant puddle

Life breathes around me
As I spin and twirl
Smiling as the sun begins to shine on me

Parting through grey clouds
It beams at me with its gorgeous rays
And we say goodbye to the remnants of the vanishing rain

Goodbye and
Thank you
Rain

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It rained a couple of days ago. Enough said.

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imagery is so clear.

i dance with abandon

Life breathes around me
As I spin and twirl


my favorite lines. life breath
really does make me think of
rain off the pavement and the
mist it creates
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~unusedEmotion Jan 14, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much! Yes, it does! I'm glad you liked it!
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:iconis-lnds:
glad you write it!
clever username too
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~unusedEmotion Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
:D
Clever? Well thanks?
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*SereneCyrene Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
Hello! Your poem has been featured here: [link] :star:
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~unusedEmotion Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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~KodokuNoNana Jan 11, 2013   General Artist
This one is marvellous! Good job! :)
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~unusedEmotion Jan 11, 2013  Student Writer
Wow thank you very much!
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Another favor returned. Good work,this.
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