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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it never scene to amaze me how complex these simple poem can be
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Writer
Indeed u_u
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:nod:
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Favriel Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
beautiful
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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Ruriko121 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Student Artisan Crafter
-sigh-
How do you talk...without talking?
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
Um-I don't know?
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Ruriko121 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
hahahaha! That's okay then ^^
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Writer
Sorry, I didn't really understand what you meant ^^'
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Ruriko121 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
oh no that's okay! Really!
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2013  Student Writer
Alright ^^
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kworking Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I LOVE!!!!!!!!!
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you!!!!!!!! Such enthusiasm, I'm honored OuO
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student General Artist
It's amazing how much depth you can put into four lines... Great job! :clap:
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Writer
It is, isn't it? I'm not sure if I properly conveyed what I was trying to, but I'm glad that it turned out alright. Thank you!
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Perianth5 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconyourewelcomesignplz:
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miontre Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Great poem, lots of meaning here. :)
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much for your comment! That means a lot to me :)
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fantasticEverything Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, it's short, but highly expressive and memorable in just four lines...
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you very much! I wasn't too sure about this contest, though I'm not sure I completely managed to convey what I wanted in those four lines...
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Know-It-Like-A-Poet Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student General Artist
This would make a brilliant visual poem to go with a bad ass painting of a warrior.
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unusedEmotion Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Student Writer
I'll definitely have to ask my friend about that :D
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